Selasa, 01 Maret 2016

Formal E-mail

my next task is making an e-mail in formal condition. this is my e-mail letter

I will be pleasure if you give me some comment about my e-mail :)

4 komentar:

  1. great email sis :)
    maybe you should pay attention in some of punctuation

    BalasHapus
  2. i think you will be more polite if you do not use the contraction, but i like your email.😀

    BalasHapus
  3. Simple and neat, I really like your email :) Btw you forgot to write 'M' in 'mantona' in capital letter

    BalasHapus