Letter of protest or complaining

Letter of Protest or Complaining

This time my task is about making a letter of protest or complaining.

4 Coral Rd
Netherland
B556 7TT

Department of Education
3 Madison Way
Netherland
M555 5TU

29 March 2016

Dear Sir or Madam,

Official complaint

I am writing on behalf of Sky Island School, and I enclose their written agreement to act on their behalf.

I hear from my child and school side that Department of Education is closed Sky Island School at the end of the year because of falling number. This happened when the new academic year has begun. I and all parents of the school feel that it is injustice for the school. So, we hope you cancel this decision.

I would also point out that Sky Land School is the only one school near my house. If it has been closed, we would have ridden 12 more km to the other nearest school. In addition I will inform on my area there are many children under 6 years that ready to school. Perhaps, next year they will full fill the falling number in Sky Land School.

In conclusion I and other parents very hope you will not close Sky Island School.

I look forward to hearing from you within the time limits set out in the local authority complaints procedure.

Yours faithfully

Sintya Nirmayasari

Letter of Inquiry and Request

This moment my task is about letter of inquiry and request.

Karelstraat 137
1051 Amsterdam, SN D15
Netherlands
March 22,2016

Sinanta Publisher
Box 1408
Amsterdam, AC T14

Attention: Customer Service Department

    The Dreamland English Course is planning to order a hundred of TOEFL books from your company. Formerly, I need some data for the proposal. Therefor, would you mind to send me some information?
    1. What are the kind of TOEFL books that you already have?
    2. How are the prices of each book?
    3. What is your recommendation of book that suitable for Senior High School students?
    4. Are there any discount if I buy a hundred books?

    I look forward to hearing from you. Thank you for your cooperation.

Sincerely,

Sintya

Sintya Nirmayasari

That's my letter.  Correct me if I'm wrong....  ~\(≧▽≦)/~

Revision :
Karelstraat 137
1051 Amsterdam, SN D15
Netherlands
March 22,2016

Sinanta Publisher
Box 1408
Amsterdam, AC T14

Attention: Customer Service Department

    The Dreamland English Course is planning to order a hundred of TOEFL books from your company. We're a friend of one of your product, Teaching English for Children. Formerly, I need some data for the proposal. Therefore, would you mind to send me some information?
    1. What kind of TOEFL books that you have?
    2. How much the prices of each book?
    3. What is your recommendation of book that suitable for Senior High School students?
    4. Are there any discount if I buy a hundred books?

    I look forward to hearing from you. Thank you for your cooperation.

Sincerely,

Sintya

Sintya Nirmayasari

Making notes

Hai... I have been having an assignment. That is to make some notes from different situations.
1. Make note from telephone message >

Caller : It's Frank Woods here.  Can you leave a note for Fred when he arrives?  It's bad news  I'm afraid. Tell him that job is off. They gave it to some form in Blackburn.  I'll call back later with the details, or he can ring me before 2.30.
Receive : I'll give him the message,  Mr Woods.

Note :

2. Situation : A friend is supposed you to arrive at your house at 4.30 p.m. It is now 4.50 and you have to get to the post office before 5. You go out and leave a note on the door.

Note :

3. Situation : you have a friend minding your house for a few days.  You live a note to tell her where some things are around the house and to remind her about feeding the cat and so on.

Note :

4. Situation :

You were in hurry and you left a note into your co-worker 's desk when she was at lunch.  You want her to take some documents into the head of the office's room.





I hope some critics and comments...  I will regard it.... Thanks and see you in next post.  ~\(≧▽≦)/~

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Formal E-mail

my next task is making an e-mail in formal condition. this is my e-mail letter

I will be pleasure if you give me some comment about my e-mail :)